První dopis na admission office
Napsal: 18 úno 2009, 23:17
Zdravím. Rád bych se zkusil dostat na nějakou univerzitu v USA a v případě, že by mi nabídli slušný stipendium, bych tam i rád studoval a současně sportoval. Ted' jsem ve fázi přípravy na SAT a kontaktování jednotlivých škol. Proto bych se chtěl zeptat jestli je můj takovej ten první dopis na admission office(viz dále) v pořádku nebo jestli bych neměl něco doplnit, rozšířit, škrtnout. Uvítám každou radu, opravu, poznámku, připomínku. Samozřejmě budu rád i za každou odhalenou gramatickou či jinou chybu.
Díky Martin
Hello,
I am 17 year old student from the Czech Republic. In March 2010 I will graduate from high school. I have the best grades in my class. My GPA is almost 4 (exactly 3,98) and I plan to take the SAT and TOEFL in fall this year. I am a member of an ice hockey team which competes in the highest national league for 17 to 20 year old players. I have been playing this sport for 14 years and when I was 15 years old I was a member of the Czech ice hockey national team U16. The existence of the ice hockey team is one of many reasons why I have a serious interest to study at (name of the university).
I would be glad if you could inform me about an application procedure, requirements and possibilities of financial aid for international students.
I look forward to hear from you and hope to stay in contact.
Sincerely,
Martin
Díky Martin
Hello,
I am 17 year old student from the Czech Republic. In March 2010 I will graduate from high school. I have the best grades in my class. My GPA is almost 4 (exactly 3,98) and I plan to take the SAT and TOEFL in fall this year. I am a member of an ice hockey team which competes in the highest national league for 17 to 20 year old players. I have been playing this sport for 14 years and when I was 15 years old I was a member of the Czech ice hockey national team U16. The existence of the ice hockey team is one of many reasons why I have a serious interest to study at (name of the university).
I would be glad if you could inform me about an application procedure, requirements and possibilities of financial aid for international students.
I look forward to hear from you and hope to stay in contact.
Sincerely,
Martin